Once again the work that has been sent to me has nothing to do with the instructions. I uploaded the feedback and insisted on you reading it so you could understand what to do from there. The files that I uploaded, which is my 2900 word EE, and my teacher’s feedback of that EE is what you needed to focus on. I ordered 1200 words as a completion of the work, as the EE is supposed to be about 4000 words in total (without bibliography). My initial instructions were to complete what I wrote with the new question that I put under the project title, the initial question was To What Extent Has Globalization Reduced the Likelihood of Violent Conflict?, My teacher’s main concern was that No violent conflict is discussed let alone the extent to which globalization has reduced or increased it. Which is why he advised me to complete the essay with a different research question, because what I had written so far related more to the new research question that he advised me to use which is to what extent has globalization been able to reduce economic inequality? I needed you to edit whatever needed to be edited, according to the feedback that I submitted under files. And the 1200 words that I ordered were the continuation of that paper which should have equated to a total of around 4000 words. Please review the files that I uploaded and review this new set of instructions, if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
To review this one last time, I have submitted 3 files that you need to focus on :
1. “Globalization_and_Violent_Conflict.pdf”, that is the file where the beginning of the essay is, it is important that you read it in order to be able to complete the essay.
2. “file.pdf”, that is the feedback on the beginning of the Essay, it is necessary for you to read it in order to be able to edit what needs to be edited, according to the teacher’s feedback.
3. “file 11.docx”, That is additional feedback on the beginning of the EE, where you can find the rubric (how I am marked) as well as the new question that my teacher told me to answer. The document will also help you with how to structure your arguments.
Please complete the essay, and DO NOT change the question. The question is TO WHAT EXTENT HAS GLOBALIZATION BEEN ABLE TO REDUCE ECONOMIC INEQUALITY? I urge the writer not to change the question or even rephrase it.
If the person writing this paper is inexperienced with Extended Essay, I urge you to use and follow the structure presented in this website
https://www.ibmastery.com/blog/the-ib-global-politics-extended-essay-structure
The writer that has revised my paper previously has basically written a cocktail of the two questions, he speaks about violent conflict and economic inequality. Just to be clear the only question that should be addressed is TO WHAT EXTENT HAS GLOBALIZATION BEEN ABLE TO REDUCE ECONOMIC INEQUALITY? And that question should translate not only in the main body but also in the introduction, methodology, conclusion, and wherever appropriate. The writer has also copy-pasted the same arguments from one page to another, to whoever is writing this please do not do that
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