Hi, i have already made a thesis half way about “cultural diversity” the main research question: is about What Impact would the increase in cultural diversity have on performance of firms and how can it relate to US banks?
and the subquestion:is In what ways have firms increased their cultural diversity empirically and how can US banks achieve the same results? Therefore the focus of this thesis would be the cultural diversity in banking sector in the US region specifically. Though i know some things are lacking such as the poor literature review. therefore i need some-working on it since my supervisor said that it seems to be a summary of the literature and not a proper literature review since she said that literature review is more discussing different topics where the literature form a basis for this. Also need to link literature review to US and give examples. If you were to say to include a theory say why that specific theory is relevant to the topic.
Also i think i need to have a opening where concepts/theories are discussed in the literature review and why. And my supervisor has said that i have jump into another topic too quickly hence lacking the flow of transition. Also, the thesis format is literature review.
Though, if you have another similar thoughts or ideas on the research question or subquestion that you are more familiar with you can choose that so that we can alter the thesis a little bit.
attached ill send you my rough first draft that ive been working through and that my supervisor has particularly sent feedback about the thesis already so that you can take a closer look(for guide). But i want you to actually re-do and make the thesis to be way better in terms of quality !
please note that i am currently doing AMJ style for referencing.
-thesis format: literature review
my current thesis with feedback is attached
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